Choose the BEST way to improve the paragraph.
Dante and Kate walked to the park yesterday. They met their friends from school there. They played a basketball game in the gym and a soccer game on the field. They had a yummy picnic on the grass. They took a long hike on the walking trail. They enjoyed their day and the beautiful weather. They decided to plan another outdoor activity with their friends.
A Remove the first sentence.
B Add prepositional phrases to the sentences.
C Make sure each sentence is a complete thought.
D Rewrite the sentences so they all have different beginnings.
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D Rewrite the sentences so they all have different beginnings. For example: "Yesterday at the park, Dante and Kate met their friends from school." "During their time at the park, they played a basketball game in the gym and a soccer game on the field." "After their games, they enjoyed a delicious picnic on the grass." "Following their picnic, they took a long hike on the walking trail." "Overall, they had a great time and decided to plan another outdoor activity with their friends."
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