Asked by jasmine

what are personal experiences high school students face in life?
Answered by Ms. Sue
What personal experiences do you and your friends face?

Answered by jasmine
i need something to write a college essay any topics
Answered by Ms. Sue
These sites have some marvelous topics.

http://www.hpregional.org/departments/english/mhassenplug/100%20topics.html

http://www.goodessaytopics.com/college-application-essay-topics.html

http://www.mentalfloss.com/blogs/archives/37041


Answered by jasmine
could i write a college essay personal experience about living without grandparents
Answered by Ms. Sue
You could, but the topic sounds pretty ho-hum to me. To make it work, you'd need to take an unusual approach to the subject and write it brilliantly.



Answered by jasmine
so can i take a situation from living without them that helped make me a better person today
Answered by Ms. Sue
It could work, if you are very specific. You'll need to make it clear how their absence/death made you stronger and details those strengths.

Answered by jasmine
like any ideas what i can say
maybe them not being at my first birthday, senior graduation going off to college
Answered by Ms. Sue
Many children are lucky to have one parent, let alone two parents and four grandparents to celebrate these events.

Frankly, this essay sounds like a pitying essay from someone who has everything and is searching for something -- anything -- to make it sound as though you've overcome some odds to be successful. So far you haven't convinced me.

And people who read college essays are much harder critics than I am.

Answered by jasmine
okay i see i cant think of any personal experiences
Answered by Ms. Sue
Have you read through all of the 150 or so suggestions in the sites I posted?

At least that will give you an idea what topics are likely to catch the eye of the people who read these essays.

Answered by jasmine
yes but i need a personal experience
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