Question

I had to write a haiku about a special day in my life so I wrote about my birthays.

Cake on the table (5)
Showing growth of a year (7)
Happy Birthday, you (5)

This is the best I could do..is it OK?

Thanks
-MC

Answer 1

http://www.ehow.com/how_3336_write-haiku.html

Sounds good.

=)

Answer 2

thanks...that's the site i used!
-MC

Answer 3

However, I only see six syllables in the second line.

You could add "the" before "growth."

Answer 4

Good catch, Ms. Sue. I read right over that.

Answer 5

Bobpursley tipped me off. <g>

Answer 6

Alright..thanks! (:
-MC

Answer 7

Ahhhhh, the guy who tunes into numbers! Makes sense to me! <g>

Answer 8

But..he hasn't commented on this post...
-MC

Answer 9

My comment would have been you could have done better.