Asked by mysterychicken
I had to write a haiku about a special day in my life so I wrote about my birthays.
Cake on the table (5)
Showing growth of a year (7)
Happy Birthday, you (5)
This is the best I could do..is it OK?
Thanks
-MC
Cake on the table (5)
Showing growth of a year (7)
Happy Birthday, you (5)
This is the best I could do..is it OK?
Thanks
-MC
Answers
Answered by
Writeacher
http://www.ehow.com/how_3336_write-haiku.html
Sounds good.
=)
Sounds good.
=)
Answered by
mysterychicken
thanks...that's the site i used!
-MC
-MC
Answered by
Ms. Sue
However, I only see six syllables in the second line.
You could add "the" before "growth."
You could add "the" before "growth."
Answered by
Writeacher
Good catch, Ms. Sue. I read right over that.
Answered by
Ms. Sue
Bobpursley tipped me off. <g>
Answered by
mysterychicken
Alright..thanks! (:
-MC
-MC
Answered by
Writeacher
Ahhhhh, the guy who tunes into numbers! Makes sense to me! <g>
Answered by
mysterychicken
But..he hasn't commented on this post...
-MC
-MC
Answered by
bobpursley
My comment would have been you could have done better.
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