Asked by mysterychicken

I had to write a haiku about a special day in my life so I wrote about my birthays.

Cake on the table (5)
Showing growth of a year (7)
Happy Birthday, you (5)

This is the best I could do..is it OK?

Thanks
-MC


Answered by Writeacher
http://www.ehow.com/how_3336_write-haiku.html

Sounds good.

=)
Answered by mysterychicken
thanks...that's the site i used!
-MC
Answered by Ms. Sue
However, I only see six syllables in the second line.

You could add "the" before "growth."



Answered by Writeacher
Good catch, Ms. Sue. I read right over that.
Answered by Ms. Sue
Bobpursley tipped me off. <g>

Answered by mysterychicken
Alright..thanks! (:
-MC
Answered by Writeacher
Ahhhhh, the guy who tunes into numbers! Makes sense to me! <g>
Answered by mysterychicken
But..he hasn't commented on this post...
-MC
Answered by bobpursley
My comment would have been you could have done better.
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