Question

1. Is Eminem a male name or a femalee name?
How do you pronounce "Eminem."

2. When you give birth to the baby, you will feel painful.

3. When you deliever the baby, you will feel painful.

4. When you are delivered of the baby, you will feel painful.

(Which expression is right of the three? Do you ahve better expressions?)

5. You have high blood pressure and overweight. If you don't be careful when you eat, you will be serious. Reduce eating meat, and then try to eat vegetables. Your blood test result and your urine test result is normal. However, you are overwight, and you have high blood pressure. Only one month is left till the deliverance time. You should be very careful. If not, you will bear the baby by cutting your belly.

(Would you check this passage? Correct erors, pleasse.)

Answer 1

1. Is Eminem a male name or a femalee name?
How do you pronounce "Eminem."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eminem
<b>It's neither male nor female; it's simply a stage name and could be either, I guess. Pronunciation: em n em</b>

2. When you give birth to the baby, you will feel painful.
<b>Delete "painful" and insert "pain."</b>

3. When you deliever the baby, you will feel painful.
<b>Delete "painful" and insert "pain." Check the spelling -- "deliver"</b>

4. When you are delivered of the baby, you will feel painful.
<b>Delete "painful" and insert "pain."</b>

(Which expression is right of the three? Do you ahve better expressions?)
<b>Of 2, 3, and 4, #2 is the best.</b>

5. You have high blood pressure and <b>are</b> overweight. If you <b>are not</b> careful when you eat, you will be serious<b><~~I don't know what you mean to say here</b>. <b>Eat less</b> meat <b>more</b> vegetables. Your blood <b>and urine test results will be</b> normal. However, you are overwight<b><~~watch spelling</b>, and you have high blood pressure.<b><~~Why is this sentence being repeated?</b> Only one month is left <b>until the baby is due</b>. You should be very careful. If not, you will <b>need to have a Caesarian section</b>.

(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cesarean )

Answer 2

This sentence should have "and" in it:

Eat less meat and more vegetables.