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Note: Your teacher will grade your response to ensure that you receive proper credit for your answer. Your response should include the following to receive the points in parentheses: Rewrite to create a paragraph of 3–5 sentences and make sure sentence structure differs noticeably from the original. Combine sentence fragments with a conjunction. Rewrite the paragraph above, correcting any fragments and run-on sentences. Be sure to use correct punctuation.
Scientists report that creatures living in the deep sea are in danger of starving to death. Millions of undiscovered species live, in the deep sea. Creatures in the seabed are suffering from growing food shortages. Which may be a result of rising sea temperatures. Scientists believe that some species will die out, those that can survive on a low food supply will continue living. Not much is known about the creatures that live in the deep sea, not much is known about the changes in their diets. Scientists estimate that up to 10 million species live in the depths of the sea. Most animals of the deep rely on food chains that begin. In the lighted realms of the sea. Microscopic plants called phytoplankton. Capture the sun and start the food cycle. Wherever there are animal droppings, there is a constant rain of organic matter that feeds the bottom dwellers. (FANBOYS-for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)

Answer 1

Scientists report that creatures living in the deep sea are in danger of starving to death, with millions of undiscovered species existing in the depths. Creatures in the seabed are suffering from growing food shortages, which may be a result of rising sea temperatures. Scientists believe that some species will die out, but those that can survive on a low food supply will continue living. Not much is known about the creatures that live in the deep sea or the changes in their diets, but scientists estimate that up to 10 million species live in the depths of the sea. Most animals of the deep rely on food chains that begin in the lighted realms of the sea, where microscopic plants called phytoplankton capture the sun and start the food cycle, and wherever there are animal droppings, there is a constant rain of organic matter that feeds the bottom dwellers.