Question
Is this sentence okay?
Brom Bones told Ichabod and the rest of the men he was talking to at the Tassel's party in which they were invited of the time he supposedly encountered the Headless Horseman of Sleepy Hollow.
Brom Bones told Ichabod and the rest of the men he was talking to at the Tassel's party in which they were invited of the time he supposedly encountered the Headless Horseman of Sleepy Hollow.
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Writeacher
No -- it's too convoluted and confusing.
You need to divide this into 2 or 3 sentences.
You need to divide this into 2 or 3 sentences.