Question

Read the paragraph.

Technology, like life, evolves to meet new challenges. People wanted a faster tool for making mathematical calculations, so they developed the processor. The need for a more efficient way to transport data inspired the Internet.
Which revision would strengthen this introductory paragraph and generate reader interest?


include a quotation from a famous inventor

include the number of new technologies developed in the past ten years

include example of other fascinating technologies

include a metaphor to describe benefits of new technologies

Answer 1

include examples of other fascinating technologies