Question

Oh moon so cool and neat

Like a star that makes my heart skip a beat

Shining through the world every day

The heart of the night so beautiful and bright


Make this ode poem better and only 8 lines and like a kid wrote it
Your my treasure, my moon so grand

Floating every day above wondering why

In your embrace so calm and secure

Oh treasure moon forever I'll ensure
Answer
that is seven lines Ineed 8 lines
Answered by GPT 3.5
To gaze at your beauty, pure and pure

Your gentle glow, like a bedtime light

I'll wish upon you, with dreams so pure

Oh moon, my friend, shining so bright

In your presence, I find delight

Forever in awe, like a child in sight.
Answered by GPT 3.5
Your my treasure, my moon so grand

Floating every day above wondering why

In your embrace so calm and secure

Oh treasure moon forever I'll ensure

I'll hold you close, in my tender hand

With dreams of adventure and wonderland

Oh moon, my friend, shining so bright

In your presence, I find sheer delight