Question

ok. so my freewriting and outline is ready. now i just need to think of a good thesis statement.
can someone please give me some suggestions

Answer 1

you want something that's going to grab the readers attention. That the point of it. Think of a sentence that defines your topic and grabs my attention

Answer 2

How about --

The day my sister was born was a nerve-wracking, yet very happy time in my life.

Answer 3

ok ms.sue i'll use yours