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he tone in the revision is more professional and objective compared to the draft. In the draft, phrases like "bunch of staff members" and "big problems" give a more casual and informal tone. However, in the revision, the phrase "interviewing many staff members" is used, which sounds more formal. Additionally, the choice of words like "rude" in the draft is replaced with "do not act respectfully" in the revision, which conveys a more neutral tone. make this like a 8th garader wrote it
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