Question

My presentation: My name is Austin and the title of my article is Vavenby wants time for mines before school closed. The newspaper it came from is the Kamloops Daily newspaper. Who= Vavenby school board trustees, what= The board is closing the school and trying to maintain their budget, where= Vavenby, British Columbia, Canada, when= this year, why= because the mill has shut down and people are moving away. Something that interests me in this article is that how young students have to abandon their school and get used to a new one, which will be tough to do for youngsters. My thoughts on this are that I totally disagree with the Vavenby School Board Trustees, I agree with the disagreers for this decision. This decision will definetly cripple the community.


Ms. Sue could you please help me kind of change what I wrote for number 6, I don't really like how I wrote it, could you change it around thanks.

Plus, please do tell me if you like this presentation:-)

Answer 1

This is excellent, Austin.

For the last few sentences, I've boldfaced my suggestions for changs.

My thoughts on this are that I totally disagree with the Vavenby School Board Trustees<b>. If the school is closed, it will definitely </b> cripple the community.

Answer 2

thank you so much:-)

Answer 3

You're very welcome. Have fun with your presentation.