Question
Javier wrote the following four lines he could possibly use open his narrative about two friends who raise a friendly dragon. Which opening line is not effective?
"Charlie!" Kiana yelled, hovering over a large metallic purple egg. "You'll never believe what I found!"
The forest was dense and thick, and Charlie and Kiana had trouble navigating the mysterious glimmering fog that covered the ground like a blanket.
Once upon a time, there were two friends who did something cool, and I will tell you all about it.
When Kiana imagined her ideal pet, a giant scaly fire-breathing dragon wasn't what she had in mind.
"Charlie!" Kiana yelled, hovering over a large metallic purple egg. "You'll never believe what I found!"
The forest was dense and thick, and Charlie and Kiana had trouble navigating the mysterious glimmering fog that covered the ground like a blanket.
Once upon a time, there were two friends who did something cool, and I will tell you all about it.
When Kiana imagined her ideal pet, a giant scaly fire-breathing dragon wasn't what she had in mind.
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The opening line that is not effective is: "Once upon a time, there were two friends who did something cool, and I will tell you all about it." This opening line is not effective because it does not capture the reader's attention or create any intrigue or excitement about the story.
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