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I have to write to Expedia for their mistake on reserving my car rental at LA. I want a free car rental voucher.
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Tajinder Singh
392 Hinter Wayne Drive,
Nashville, TN 52312
July 09, 2007
Mr. Bill Adams
Expedia Travel Inc.
1821 White Marsh Street,
Atlanta, GA 22929
Dear Mr. Adams,
I am writing this letter for your knowledge about my trip of Los Angeles one week ago. I have always used Expedia for my travel, and I have been satisfied from it from last 4 years. It has always guaranteed me the good trip from my past experiences. Recently, I had bad experience with using Expedia for my car reservations at Lafayette airport at Los Angeles.
When I reached the Lafayette airport, I went to Budget car rental to pick up my car but the person working over there told me I have no reservations for the car. He also informed me at that time they don’t have any other car available. I checked other car rental services at the airport but to no use. I called the Expedia, and the representative on the phone said that he has my reservation and the confirmation number. I was not convinced that Expedia has made reservation for me. After that, I called my friend and he came 40 miles driving to pick me up from airport. I was really embarrassed for troubling him.
As this was my bad experience with using Expedia, I would like a free car rental voucher for future trip to Miami, Florida. I am sure somewhere there have been mistake with your system. It will provide me happiness and you will be satisfying your loyal customer.
Thanks,
Tajinder Singh
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is it okey?
<b>My corrections and comments below are in bold; be sure to find them all!</b>
Dear Mr. Adams,<b><~~use colon (:), not comma here</b>
I am writing <b>to tell you</b> about my trip <b>to</b> Los Angeles one week ago. I have always used Expedia <b>to make</b> my travel <b>arrangements</b>, and I have been satisfied <b>with your services for the</b> last 4 years. <b>Expedia</b> has always guaranteed me <b>a</b> good trip from my past experiences<b><~~delete "from my past experiences" - those words are repetitive and unnecessary</b>. Recently, <b>however</b>, I had <b>a</b> bad experience with<b><~~delete "with"</b> using Expedia for my car reservations at Lafayette airport <b>in</b> Los Angeles.
When I reached the<b><~~delete "the"</b> Lafayette airport, I went to Budget car rental to pick up my car<b><~~add comma</b> but the person working over<b><~~delete "over"</b> there told me I <b>had</b> no reservations for the car. He also informed me <b>that, at that time, they didn't</b> have any other car available. I checked other car rental services at the airport<b><~~add comma</b> but to no use. I called the<b><~~delete "the"</b> Expedia, and the representative on the phone said that he <b>had</b> my reservation and the confirmation number. I was not convinced that Expedia <b>had</b> made <b>the</b> reservation for me. After that, I called <b>a friend, who drove 40 miles to pick me up</b> from airport. I was really embarrassed for troubling him.
<b>Because of this</b> bad experience with<b><~~delete "with"</b> using Expedia, I would like a free car rental voucher for <b>a</b> future trip to Miami, Florida. I am sure somewhere there <b>was a</b> mistake with your system. It<b><~~What is "it"? the mistake? the future rental voucher? what?</b> will provide me happiness<b><~~add comma</b> and you will be satisfying your loyal customer.
<b>Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,</b>
I have to write to Expedia for their mistake on reserving my car rental at LA. I want a free car rental voucher.
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Tajinder Singh
392 Hinter Wayne Drive,
Nashville, TN 52312
July 09, 2007
Mr. Bill Adams
Expedia Travel Inc.
1821 White Marsh Street,
Atlanta, GA 22929
Dear Mr. Adams,
I am writing this letter for your knowledge about my trip of Los Angeles one week ago. I have always used Expedia for my travel, and I have been satisfied from it from last 4 years. It has always guaranteed me the good trip from my past experiences. Recently, I had bad experience with using Expedia for my car reservations at Lafayette airport at Los Angeles.
When I reached the Lafayette airport, I went to Budget car rental to pick up my car but the person working over there told me I have no reservations for the car. He also informed me at that time they don’t have any other car available. I checked other car rental services at the airport but to no use. I called the Expedia, and the representative on the phone said that he has my reservation and the confirmation number. I was not convinced that Expedia has made reservation for me. After that, I called my friend and he came 40 miles driving to pick me up from airport. I was really embarrassed for troubling him.
As this was my bad experience with using Expedia, I would like a free car rental voucher for future trip to Miami, Florida. I am sure somewhere there have been mistake with your system. It will provide me happiness and you will be satisfying your loyal customer.
Thanks,
Tajinder Singh
--------------------------------
is it okey?
<b>My corrections and comments below are in bold; be sure to find them all!</b>
Dear Mr. Adams,<b><~~use colon (:), not comma here</b>
I am writing <b>to tell you</b> about my trip <b>to</b> Los Angeles one week ago. I have always used Expedia <b>to make</b> my travel <b>arrangements</b>, and I have been satisfied <b>with your services for the</b> last 4 years. <b>Expedia</b> has always guaranteed me <b>a</b> good trip from my past experiences<b><~~delete "from my past experiences" - those words are repetitive and unnecessary</b>. Recently, <b>however</b>, I had <b>a</b> bad experience with<b><~~delete "with"</b> using Expedia for my car reservations at Lafayette airport <b>in</b> Los Angeles.
When I reached the<b><~~delete "the"</b> Lafayette airport, I went to Budget car rental to pick up my car<b><~~add comma</b> but the person working over<b><~~delete "over"</b> there told me I <b>had</b> no reservations for the car. He also informed me <b>that, at that time, they didn't</b> have any other car available. I checked other car rental services at the airport<b><~~add comma</b> but to no use. I called the<b><~~delete "the"</b> Expedia, and the representative on the phone said that he <b>had</b> my reservation and the confirmation number. I was not convinced that Expedia <b>had</b> made <b>the</b> reservation for me. After that, I called <b>a friend, who drove 40 miles to pick me up</b> from airport. I was really embarrassed for troubling him.
<b>Because of this</b> bad experience with<b><~~delete "with"</b> using Expedia, I would like a free car rental voucher for <b>a</b> future trip to Miami, Florida. I am sure somewhere there <b>was a</b> mistake with your system. It<b><~~What is "it"? the mistake? the future rental voucher? what?</b> will provide me happiness<b><~~add comma</b> and you will be satisfying your loyal customer.
<b>Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,</b>