Anonymous -- or Fats --
Is this still the same assignment in which you're supposed to go from the general to the specific?
Is this still the same assignment in which you're supposed to go from the general to the specific?
Your paragraph is disjointed and wanders all over the place. It certainly does not start with a generality and end with a specific.
Your assignment is to take a broad topic like shelter and continually narrow it down to be very specific. Several tutors have posted suggestions for you.
Please go back and read all of the posts that responded to you.
Here is your most general sentence:
Everyone needs shelter.
How will you take it from there?
Shelter --
Shelter is something that helps protect people from the elements.
Everyone needs some kind of shelter.
It is very important.
It protects us from many things.
Most importantly because of the weather.
To obtain shelter, one can consider several options. Here are a few ways:
1. Personal shelter: People can find or create their own shelter to protect themselves. This involves finding a physical location such as a house, apartment, or even a makeshift structure like a tent or cave. Renting or purchasing a property is common for long-term shelter needs.
2. Shelter organizations: There are shelters specifically designed to offer temporary housing for individuals or families in need. These organizations often provide emergency shelters for those facing homelessness or escaping dangerous situations.
3. Government assistance: In many countries, there are government programs and initiatives aimed at providing affordable housing options for individuals and families who cannot afford adequate shelter. These programs offer financial support or subsidies to help with housing needs.
4. Non-profit organizations: Various non-profit organizations work to provide shelters for specific groups of people, such as women and children fleeing domestic violence or homeless individuals. These organizations may offer temporary accommodations, counseling services, and support to those in need.
5. Community support: Sometimes, communities come together to provide assistance and temporary shelter during times of crisis, such as natural disasters or conflicts. People open their homes or community centers may be used as shelters to provide safety for those affected.
It is important to recognize that shelter is a basic human need and everyone deserves access to a safe and secure living environment. Governments, organizations, and communities play a role in ensuring that individuals and families have access to suitable shelter to protect themselves from various environmental and social threats.