Read the sentence.
The fire truck’s siren woke me.
Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?
The fire truck’s loud siren woke me early in the morning.
The blaring siren from the bright red fire truck woke me from my deep sleep.
The siren from the fire truck had awakened me from my comfortable sleep.
The sound of the siren was so loud that it woke me up.
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The blaring siren from the bright red fire truck woke me from my deep sleep.
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