Question

1. We shouted good expressions together with the sash around the upperbody at the beach.

2. I learned how to use ropes when we go down a cliff in a mountain.

3. We got together and learned new songs accoring to the guitar sound of the leader.

4. We cleaned the beach by picking up cans, garbage, etc.

5. I learned how to give CPR to a bleathless person to wake him up.

6. I learned how to give first aid to save the life.

7. I learned how to use ropes to climb a cliff.

(Would you like to check the sentences above? Thank you.)

Answer 1

1. We shouted good expressions together with the sash around the upperbody at the beach.
<b>I don't understand this one at all, sorry! Are you trying to describe a celebration in a costume on a beach?</b>

2. I learned how to use ropes when we go down a cliff in a mountain.
<b>This is fine; you can also write, "I learned how to use ropes and rappel down the mountain."
http://www.answers.com/rappel </b>

3. We got together and learned new songs accoring to the guitar sound of the leader.
<b>Corrected: We got together and learned new songs while the leader played his guitar.</b>

4. We cleaned the beach by picking up cans, garbage, etc.
<b>Good!</b>

5. I learned how to give CPR to a bleathless person to wake him up.
<b>Corrected: I learned how to give CPR and bring a person back to life.</b>

6. I learned how to give first aid to save the life.
<b>A little correction: I learned how to give first aid and save someone's life.</b>

7. I learned how to use ropes to climb a cliff.
<b>Good!!
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