Read Kai’s brainstorming table.
Beginning: The chain on my bike became loose while I was riding with my friends. Middle: My friends and I tried to fix the chain, but we just made the problem worse. End: I took a bicycle repair class at the bike shop in my neighborhood.
Which sentence would best resolve this series of events in a descriptive narrative?
I can proudly say that I now know exactly what to do when I hear the rickety clanging of a loose bicycle chain.
My fingers and clothing were covered with sticky, black grease as I walked my busted bicycle all the way home.
I took a class at a bike shop to learn about bicycles.
All of a sudden, I heard a loud clanging sound.
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I quickly looked down and realized that the chain on my bike had become loose.
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