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"With the portfolio I went back and saw just how little effort I put into it, so this time I really made sure to use proper wording and make stuff a lot more clear and include the story this time."
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"Upon reviewing my portfolio, I realized that I hadn't invested much effort into it previously. Consequently, this time around, I made a conscious effort to improve the wording, clarity, and overall content. Additionally, I made sure to include the story behind each piece."