Asked by Writeacher
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I`m not too sure how to put in a transition sentance from the intro to body paragraph. I thought I would just go into saying "when the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability, which in turn bring's forth his downfall"
<b>I'd use this, yes, but I'd have it stop after "probability." Otherwise, you end up with more repetition.</b>
I`m not too sure how to put in a transition sentance from the intro to body paragraph. I thought I would just go into saying "when the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability, which in turn bring's forth his downfall"
<b>I'd use this, yes, but I'd have it stop after "probability." Otherwise, you end up with more repetition.</b>
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Lena
Thank you sooooooo much :)
Answered by
Writeacher
You're very welcome! Go get an A!!
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