Asked by Sam
                Im working on poetry at school and I'm suppose to make a limerick. The rhyme scheme is aabba. I'm now just having trouble on the last one. 
Be my friend, I plead.
A friend is all I need.
Please be the one that I can trust.
Don't ever let our friendship rust.
Help?
            
        Be my friend, I plead.
A friend is all I need.
Please be the one that I can trust.
Don't ever let our friendship rust.
Help?
Answers
                    Answered by
            bobpursley
            
    friendship rust?  Hmmmm.
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you don't know.
    
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you don't know.
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    You need to work on the rhythm and number of syllables in each line, in addition to the rhyme.
http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm
    
http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm
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