Asked by Sam
Im working on poetry at school and I'm suppose to make a limerick. The rhyme scheme is aabba. I'm now just having trouble on the last one.
Be my friend, I plead.
A friend is all I need.
Please be the one that I can trust.
Don't ever let our friendship rust.
Help?
Be my friend, I plead.
A friend is all I need.
Please be the one that I can trust.
Don't ever let our friendship rust.
Help?
Answers
Answered by
bobpursley
friendship rust? Hmmmm.
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you don't know.
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you don't know.
Answered by
Writeacher
You need to work on the rhythm and number of syllables in each line, in addition to the rhyme.
http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm
http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm