A book that has an exciting introduction and a surprising ending would be the best story for me to read.
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Be sure to read the first sentence very carefully -- then read the rest. I think the problem in this sentence is with the linking verb (would be).
How can you fix it?
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I would re-write the sentence this way.
I would enjoy most a book with an exciting introduction and a surprising ending .
That way there is no repetition of "book/story" and everything modifies what it is nearest.