which one is better pick one

Question

The data is valid with the scope of the claim evidenced by a consistent trend of lowered number of measles cases in India as vaccine coverage increases proving government management strategies effective controlling the disease.

The claim's scope is supported by data that is accurate, and a steady decline in measles cases in India as vaccination rates rise attests to the efficacy of government control measures.

Answer 1

Both statements convey the same idea and effectively support the claim. It ultimately depends on personal preference which one is considered "better."