Question

All people have their own perspectives of war as being ideological human activity.

or

All people have their own perspectives of war a being idelogical.

Which one of these is correct? If not how can i fix it. Thank You

Answer 1

The adjective "ideological" needs to describe people -- because only people can have ideas. War cannot have ideas!!

Try breaking it into two sentences and being very straightforward about what you're trying to say. Then re-post.

Answer 2

All people have their own perspectives about ideological human activity related to war.

Answer 3

"Human activity" is not people or a person.

All people have their own ideologies about war.

or

All people have their own perspectives about the reasons for war.

or

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Answer 4

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rudolf_Flesch

His books are still around. You would do yourself a favor with reading How to write better, or his other topics similar. They are quick reads, before a Friday night date.

Answer 5

http://www.lousywriter.com/
This website is really a good one, too.