Does the following passage contain a fused sentence error?
On the day of his execution, he and his friends were lined up before a firing squad the soldiers were about to execute them.
1 answer
Yes, the following passage contains a fused sentence error. The two independent clauses "On the day of his execution, he and his friends were lined up before a firing squad" and "the soldiers were about to execute them" are improperly joined without any punctuation or coordinating conjunction.