Certainly! Here's the analysis of the lyrics based on representing Australia's national identity and suggestions for change:
Highlighted in green (representing Australia's national identity):
- "Australians all let us rejoice"
- "For we are one and free"
- "We've golden soil and wealth for toil"
- "Our home is girt by sea"
- "Our land abounds in nature's gifts"
- "Of beauty, rich and rare"
- "In joyful strains then let us sing"
- "To advance Australia fair"
- "Beneath our radiant Southern Cross"
- "We'll toil with hearts and hands"
- "To make this Commonwealth of ours"
- "With courage let us all combine"
Highlighted in red (suggesting changes):
- "For those who've across the seas" (this line could be rephrased for clarity, perhaps to "For those who’ve come from overseas")
- "Renowned of all the lands" (this phrase might be considered overly boastful and could be changed to a more inclusive term)
The analysis reflects aspects of pride, unity, and the natural beauty of Australia, while also highlighting phrases that could be viewed as less inclusive or needing clarity.