Question

In a paragraph of three to five sentences first write a sentence that uses a shift in voice. Then explain why the shift is incorrect finally write a sentence that corrects the shift

Answer 1

While reading the book, the story is told from the perspective of the main character. This shift in voice is incorrect because it switches from third person to first person without proper transition or indication. A correct sentence would be: While reading the book, the story was told from the perspective of the main character.