"People can enjoy watching soap operas. They can get a lot of lessons by watching soap operas. Documentaries give us a lot of useful information as well."
You need to add some detail about this. What lessons can people learn from soap operas? What lessons from documentaries?
At the beginning of the last sentence, you should use "To conclude" or "In conclusion" but not "To conclusion."
What are the good points and bad points of watching TV?
The strong points are as follows.
We can learn a lot of things by watching TV. There are many kinds of educational programs, so we can learn many subjects. We can get the information about the weather, we can get the information about daily news, and we can also get the information about sports news. People can enjoy watching soap operas. They can get a lot of lessons by watching soap operas. Documentaries give us a lot of useful information as well.
The bad points are as follows.
TV takes us away from other things.
Because of TV, we can not study hard.
Because of TV, we can not exercise regularly. Because of TV, we cannot help our parents effectively. We can learn violence from violence programs.
We have to talk with family members and friends, but TV prevents us from doing so.
To conclusion, it's up to us. We should choose good programs, and do not waste time.
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