OK, I'm going to show you some sentence combining below so you don't have so many short, simple sentences in succession. Read and compare carefully to your own sentences above because I've added punctuation and changed some wording in places.
Hello, everybody. We are going to talk about TV programs. What kinds of TV programs do you like?
I like documentaries and action movies. However, I like documentary programs better because I can learn a lot of lessons from them. [<~~WHAT LESSONS DO YOU LEARN FROM DOCUMENTARIES? ADD ONE SENTENCE.]
I also like historical dramas very much. I have watched the videos called "Warriors' Times". This drama is about the ruling of the soldiers during the Korye Period.
I don't like watching soap operas, though. In our country, numerous housewives seem to like watching soap operas. They can also learn a lot of lessons from soap operas. [<~~WHAT LESSONS DO THEY LEARN FROM SOAP OPERAS?]
What kinds of TV programs do you like, class? You like animation programs, don't you? Science fiction programs are also popular among young people. Do you like horror movies? Action movies would be more interesting than horror movies. [<~~WHY ARE ACTION MOVIES MORE INTERESTING?] Some people are interested in talk shows, quiz programs, and news programs. What about you?
Each of you should say the programs you like. Look at the kinds of TV programs I have distributed, and tell us what kinds you like. I like action movies and horror movies. Good job! What about you, Don? Tell me your favorite kinds of TV programs. I like sitcoms and cooking programs. Well done!
OK, class. You expressed your favorite kinds of TV programs well. Let's move on to the next part.
Hello, everybody. We are going to talk about TV programs. What kinds of TV programs do you like?
I like documentaries. I also like action movies. However, I like documentary programs better. Because I can learn a lot of lessons from watching documentaries. I like historical dramas very much. I have watched the videos Iabout "Warriors' Times". This drama is about the ruling of the soldiers during the Korye Period. However I don't like watching soap operas. In our country numerous housewives seem to like watching soap operas. They can also learn a lot of lessons from soap operas. What kinds of TV programs do you like, class? You like animation programs, don't you. SF programs are also popular among young people. Do you like horror movies? Action movies would be more interesting than horror movies. Some people are interested in talk shows, quiz programs and news programs. What about you?
Each of you should say the programs you like. I have already distributed the TV programs. Look at the kinds of TV programs, and choose the kinds of TV programs you like.... What kinds of TV programs do you like? I like action movies and horror movies. Good job! What about you, Don? Tell me your favorite kinds of TV programs. I like sitcoms and cooking programs. Well done! OK, class. You expressed your favorite kinds of TV programs well. Let's move on to the next part. (Would you check the passage and correct incorrect expressions. I appreciate your help.)
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One more correction:
...the videos called "Warriors' Times." <~~ The quotation marks belong after the period, not before.
...the videos called "Warriors' Times." <~~ The quotation marks belong after the period, not before.
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