The 1991 Honda Civic was the worst car made that year. <~~ claim
It seemed something went wrong with mine every week. <~~ reason
My car repair bills in 1991 were higher than I’d ever had before. <~~ evidence
What will you write? Post it here if you want someone to critique it.
Write a 3-5 sentence paragraph that includes a claim, at least one reason to support the claim, and one piece of evidence that supports the claim.
help i need need an example on this!
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Thank you for the example! Here's what i came up with and i want to make sure it has the correct claim, reason, evidence.
Example: This art kit i bought is the worst! The paint brushes seem to have been dyed and whenever i use them, it leaves a black liquid causing the paint to turn a darker shade! And when i use the water colors, After drying, It makes the paper wrinkle and have a brittle feel to it.
Example: This art kit i bought is the worst! The paint brushes seem to have been dyed and whenever i use them, it leaves a black liquid causing the paint to turn a darker shade! And when i use the water colors, After drying, It makes the paper wrinkle and have a brittle feel to it.
EX:
Owning a pet is great for your (Mental) health. <Claim
Lowers chance -> Anxiety/stables emotions <Reason 1
Dog Griffin -> company around me -> keeps me less stress (ignore negativity) -> calm and happy < Evidence for reason 1
Keeps you-> company: e.g. grief <Reason 2
Mom -> passed away -> Dog Griffin -> finds way - cheer up <- me (Reduce negative behaviors & think positive)< Evidence for reason 2
Owning a pet is great for your (Mental) health. <Claim
Lowers chance -> Anxiety/stables emotions <Reason 1
Dog Griffin -> company around me -> keeps me less stress (ignore negativity) -> calm and happy < Evidence for reason 1
Keeps you-> company: e.g. grief <Reason 2
Mom -> passed away -> Dog Griffin -> finds way - cheer up <- me (Reduce negative behaviors & think positive)< Evidence for reason 2
Thanks! I made another post of this put it's more positive than what i last wrote
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