"The Guitar" and "Poor Fish"
1. Misplaced Modifier
2. Heart that is broken
3. Person vs. society
4. It was the first time that a woman, even a woman like Ida, had said things like this to me, and I lost my head….
5. Remains bewildered regarding Ida’s continuing adoration for him.
6. At this the woman started to laugh…
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