Asked by Masum Khan

They emphasized the importance of good maternal and child health care, including the administering of vaccines. what correction should be made to this sentence?
1.replace they with it
2.change emphasized to emphasize
3.change the spelling of importance to important
4.insert a comma after importance
5.remove the comma after care.
Answered by Anonymous 2
Make each of those substitutions and read the sentence aloud each time. Does any of them sound right?

Answered by oobleck
#1 seems good to me, but only if you're talking about a report or article, instead of some people. Otherwise, the sentence is just fine.