Question
Which revision provides the best clarity for the reader?
Sneakers typically force runners to land on their heels, sending shocks throughout the [body. While making] minimal use of the spring-like arch and large tendons of the foot.
F. NO CHANGE
G. body; while making
H. body, while making
J. body--while making
Sneakers typically force runners to land on their heels, sending shocks throughout the [body. While making] minimal use of the spring-like arch and large tendons of the foot.
F. NO CHANGE
G. body; while making
H. body, while making
J. body--while making