Question
A beautiful world blossoms in my heart,
It rises and sprouts, a luminous start.
This world is completely of my opinion,
It becomes a truly defiant dominion.
The people are very loving here.
I hold this world near and dear.
No wars or disputes ever take place,
No discrimination against any race.
No famine nor poverty,
Not a single oddity.
No injustice to see,
No one can bother me.
In my world everything's good as gold,
Not too hot nor too cold.
There's just one thing missing.
-It's not existing.
Anything to change?
It rises and sprouts, a luminous start.
This world is completely of my opinion,
It becomes a truly defiant dominion.
The people are very loving here.
I hold this world near and dear.
No wars or disputes ever take place,
No discrimination against any race.
No famine nor poverty,
Not a single oddity.
No injustice to see,
No one can bother me.
In my world everything's good as gold,
Not too hot nor too cold.
There's just one thing missing.
-It's not existing.
Anything to change?
Answers
❄ Snowflake ❄
Also, I don't know what title to use. I was thinking something like "A better world" or "My world" or something..
Heyo
Sounds very good, I think "A Better World" would be the best title to go with.
Heyo
Maybe remove the apostrophe after, "No injustice to see."
❄ Snowflake ❄
Thanks, Heyo!