I hear only one rhyme in there, so clearly you don't intend the lines to rhyme. I'd space it this way:
With your blue eyes
I can hardly resist these emotions
that come as a flood
or maybe the ocean waves
reflecting the blue of a penetrating gaze
shadows of sapphire
envelope sea glass washing up
on the shores of a heart
made of sunset
How would you space the latter poem?:
With your blue eyes I can hardly resist
These emotions that come as a flood to exist
Or maybe the ocean waves
Reflecting
The blue of a penetrating gaze
Shadows of sapphire envelope
Sea glass washing upon the shores of a heart made of sunset
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That looks fine. Thanks.