Please tell me what I can do to do improve my paper thank you.

Question

Directions :
Share with your instructor and classmates any new perspectives you have on the similarities and differences between revising and editing.
How will this new understanding help you be successful in writing for both your future classes and your current or future workplace?
Share with your colleagues how FACT will help you as you compose emails and written communication in your current or future workplace.

This is what I have written so far.

Now that I have a better understanding of what revising and editing means I have a new way of thinking that will help me to be more effective in my writing. I thought that they were both the same thing, however, they are not. Revision is dealing with the content of writing, not grammar, spelling, or mechanics. When revising your document you may want to give yourself some space between you and the draft this will allow you time and space to inspect your work carefully. Revision can be a long process and you may have to do it several times, but it will help you produce your best work. Editing is done after the revision process. This involves looking for and correcting inaccuracies in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.


I will use this new understanding to help me succeed in writing for my future classes and workplace. For instance, I will use this knowledge to improve my writing skills in order to achieve a well written easy to read document. I will also use this knowledge to become a better writer and write more effectively. I will be more confident in my writing abilities and have effective communication. I want to produce my best work avoiding miscommunication which could result in poor outcomes.

Using FACT revision will help me to compose emails and memos in my future job in Health Services Administration. I will use this to make that I addressed all aspects of my main ideas. Making sure that I did not leave out essential material, cut out what is not necessary and test the organization of the material.

Answer 1

First of all, what does FACT refer to?

Answer 2

Thanks for the reply re FACT.

Your content and organization here are okay, but you’ll need to read it, one sentence at a time, from the end to the beginning to find the fragments and run-ons.

And I hope you will revise to replace all the instances of “you” in its various forms. You are writing about YOURSELF, so what is the obvious pronoun to be used?