Asked by LunarBerry

I have to write a process analysis essay that shows other students how I manage my time when taking online courses, maintaining a job, and focusing on family.

Can someone please help me come up with a thesis statement for my introduction? I am having a writer's block!

How does this sound?

Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to optimize functioning to the highest degree on a daily basis.
Answered by Writeacher
How can you revise that sentence so there aren't so many "big words" that can be simplified, yet get the same idea across?
Answered by LunarBerry
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily functioning.

What do you think? :)
Answered by Writeacher
Better.

What can you do to replace "functioning"?
https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/function?s=t
Answered by LunarBerry
Operation?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily operation.

Objectives?
Maintaining balance in life is extremely important to fulfill daily objectives.

I'm leaning towards objectives.
Answered by Writeacher
Or maybe ...

Maintaining balance among each day's tasks and activities is extremely important in order to live each day efficiently.

Or ...

Maintaining balance among each day's tasks and activities is necessary for living efficiently.
Answered by LunarBerry
I like the second one, hope you do not mind me using that in my essay!

Thank you so much!

Answered by Writeacher
No problem! And you're very welcome!!
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