Asked by Andrea
What would be a good conclusion for my thesis statement?
Dance is effective in the elementary education classroom because dance teaches empathy and movement allows for cultural expression, and dance and movement both integrate academic learning with kinesthetic intelligence.
Please help ASAP my homework is due today!!! :(
Dance is effective in the elementary education classroom because dance teaches empathy and movement allows for cultural expression, and dance and movement both integrate academic learning with kinesthetic intelligence.
Please help ASAP my homework is due today!!! :(
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Answered by
MS
That’s WAY too long for a thesis statement. And adding to it won’t help! Statement = one sentence. Start with “dance and movement both ... “ and put everything before that inside the paper where it fits.
leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Check out the pairs of sentences here — the second in each pair is a good thesis statement.
leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Check out the pairs of sentences here — the second in each pair is a good thesis statement.
Answered by
Andrea
No it's not it's only this: Dance is effective in the elementary education classroom because dance teaches empathy and movement allows for cultural expression, and dance and movement both integrate academic learning with kinesthetic intelligence. :)
Answered by
Writeacher
Did you bother to read through this webpage?
https://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
MS is right. Only this should be your thesis statement:
<i>Dance and movement both integrate academic learning with kinesthetic intelligence.</i>
I see the rest as topic sentences for the supporting paragraphs in the whole essay.
<u>Dance is effective in the elementary education classroom</u>
and
<u>dance teaches empathy and movement allows for cultural expression</u>
https://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
MS is right. Only this should be your thesis statement:
<i>Dance and movement both integrate academic learning with kinesthetic intelligence.</i>
I see the rest as topic sentences for the supporting paragraphs in the whole essay.
<u>Dance is effective in the elementary education classroom</u>
and
<u>dance teaches empathy and movement allows for cultural expression</u>
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