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Employees wanted better treatment and conditions for their labor , which brought the growth of organized labor in the 1930s.Workers were being underpaid and the movement fought for higher wages and even a minimum wage.The labor unions also fought for better hours and a better working environment that would bring less sickness and injuries.The movement helped end child labor as children should be getting education not working in a factory so young.Overall the movement helped create better conditions for workers.
What factors contributed to the growth of organized labor in the 1930s?
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It all reads well, and the content is good. Here are some suggestions --
1. Put a space after every period at the end of sentences.
2. Put "fewer" in front of "injuries" in the third sentence.
3. Add "and pay" after "conditions" in the last sentence.
4. Put a comma after "Overall" in the last sentence, and remove the space in front of the comma in the first sentence.
1. Put a space after every period at the end of sentences.
2. Put "fewer" in front of "injuries" in the third sentence.
3. Add "and pay" after "conditions" in the last sentence.
4. Put a comma after "Overall" in the last sentence, and remove the space in front of the comma in the first sentence.
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