a. The letter itself is really bad. You are asking the boss of advice? He will throw the letter away, mumbling why can't you figure how to get to work on time. That part of work is your responsibility.
b. I know, it is an assignment.
b1. When are you supposed to capitalize the first letter of a word? Review that lesson, you missed it, or forgot it. https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/capital.asp
b2. Use of pronouns. The second paragraph begins with "we". You are not British royality, and suspect you meant "I". If it is "we", you need to explain.
Please kindly check my english grammar below:
Dear Sir,
My late attendance at work was due to the transportation were leaving at our accommodation at 8:30 am and our duty time would start at 9:00 am the distance going to work would be imposssible to reach on time since that time has a heavy traffic. transportation would be leaving from accommodation at least in early time at 8:00 am to avoid late coming at work.
we should need your help at this time kindly inform or advise to our driver mr, koby that he should be leaving from accommodation as early as 8:00 am. afternoon shift would be much better since the transportation were leaving from accommodation at 12:30 noon and the work would start at 2:00pm it's enough time to avoid late coming at work place.
thank you for you kind support and understanding.
i look forward to hearing your prompt advise or inform to the driver mr. koby regading this matter.
thank you and best regards.
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