Question

You are invited to my birthday party. My birthday is November 18th. I have invited a comedian to preside at the party and we will have fun together. At the buffet, you can choose whatever food you want. I will send this invitation card to all the people you know. So, I hope you will come to my birthday party and have a good time as well.

RSVP to me at 010-1234-5678
Place: The Party in Seomyeon
Date: November 18th
Time: 6 to 9 p.m.
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Would you check the birthday party invitation? Correct any errors, please. Thank you.

Answer 1

You are invited to my birthday party. My birthday is November 18th. I have invited a comedian to <b>perform</b> at the party, and we will have fun together. At the buffet, you can choose whatever food you want. I <b>am inviting lots of</b> people you know, so I hope you will <b>come and have a good time.</b>

RSVP to me at 010-1234-5678
Place: The Party in Seomyeon
Date: November 18th
Time: 6 to 9 p.m.

<i>I made just a few changes. Overall, it reads very well.</i>