Question

In the following literature selections, individuals experience rites of passage in various ways:

The Bass, the River and Shelia Mant by W.D. Wetherell

Oranges by Gary Soto

I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by Maya Angelou

First Lesson by Philip Booth

On Turning Ten by Billy Collins

Hanging Fire by Audre Lorde

My Forbidden Face by Latifa

The Scarlet Ibis by James Hurst

My Brother's Keeper by Jay Bennett

Choose at least two of the selections above and write about the rites of passage that individuals in the selection confront. Provide evidence by including names of characters as well as specific details from the text to support your claim.

This is what I have I just want to see if I did it right and if I can improve anything.
In My Brother’s Keeper by Jay Bennett, the main character is very soft-spoken in the beginning. He does everything right and is getting a good education. His brother is a fighter and he hits a man with his car. He always helps out his brother and in this one time, he'll be putting his education on the line. It takes him a while to decide, but as the story ends he says that he'll never be his brother's keeper.

In "The Scarlet Ibis", the narrator went through the right of passage of family dying because he was there for the death of his brother. The narrator also realized that he had to face the truth that the love he had for his brother was pushed away by his arrogance and his want for Doodle to be normal. The narrator was a boy who was involved with his brothers because their parents made him take care of Doodle, thus forcing him to grow up faster than he should of. He loved his brother but did not accept him because he was handicapped. He wanted to push Doodle to achieve more than he could which ended up causing the death of his bother at the end of the story. He not only teaches Doodle how to walk but then sets out to teach Doodle a number of other life skills, including running, rowing, and climbing trees.

Answer 1

Read this very carefully:
https://www.dictionary.com/browse/rites-of-passage

Now, revise those paragraphs, making sure you are crystal clear about
1) what the rite of passage is for the character you chose, according to the definition in that linked article and
2) making it crystal clear who is who (among all those "he" and "him" pronouns).

Answer 2

Make sure you put rite not right

Answer 3

i used the entire thing but only got 11/16 point on it

Answer 4

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Answer 5

If you use others answer you need to change it so you don't get caught, if you don't you could get expelled. But you shouldn't cheat anyway on this part just because you could get caught. otherwise I couldn't care less if you cheat, I meenyou are using this website which would be considered cheating.

Answer 6

Whoever used these essays, I hope you don't get expelled lol.

Answer 7

This is a Connections Academy test question. Submitting this will result in an Honor Code Violation and a zero for the Test short essay answer.

Answer 8

Fake News lol

Answer 9

lol. i was about to say. Dang everyone sure got quite after that

Answer 10

Shut Up @Teacher at Connections Academy

Answer 11

Guys just make sure to change some words so it doesn't get recognized as plagiarism

Answer 12

If yall copy his, please use Wordtune, a browser extension, it works flawlessly and helps me improve my writing skills. Yes I'm dumb, but no I'm not. lol

Answer 13

Jay Bennett's story, My Brother's Keeper, introduces a very soft-spoken main character. He does everything right and is getting a good education. His brother is a fighter and he hits a man with his car. He always helps out his brother and in this one time, he'll be putting his education on the line. It takes him a while to decide, but as the story ends he says that he'll never be his brother's keeper.

In "The Scarlet Ibis", the narrator went through the right of passage of a family member dying because he witnessed the death of his brother. Additionally, he realized that his arrogance and desire for Doodle to be normal pushed away his love for his brother. He became involved with his brothers because their parents forced him to take care of Doodle, which forced him to grow up too quickly. Despite loving his brother, he did not accept him because he was handicapped. Doodle was pushed to achieve more than he was capable of which caused his death at the end of the story. In addition to teaching Doodle how to walk, he then teaches him other life skills, such as running, rowing, and climbing trees.





this is what I put, got a 100%

Answer 14

dude above me if the same teacher you sent that to sees this ur gonna get caught red handed just saying.

Answer 15

perksyk, we're probably in the same class, so thanks to you I can no longer use this answer 😂

Answer 16

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Answer 17

Bruh why is there a teacher even here smh

Answer 18

y'all- im gonna cry ive given up and am just gonna explode with these essays. ty

Answer 19

I just need help on what to do, I have adhd so it’s hard for me to understand what I need to do. If someone could just explain that, that would be amazing.☺️

Answer 20

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Answer 21

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Answer 22

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