Question

I'm writing a 3 page essay Now my first page is complete and I'm talking about how everyone loves the internet/technology so much and depends on it and how the internet makes everything so convenient and easy, now how can I make a transition paragraph so I can start talking about the next thing? After the transition paragraph I think I want to start with defining social media, and then I'll start talking about all of the apps. but how can I make this flow into how many jobs or careers the internet has created?? Or should the Job part start at the beginning of the second page? Im trying to stay in order and on topic

Answer 1

#1. You will not be talking. You will be writing. Big difference.

#2. Where is your outline with thesis statement for this? Please include it, so we can tell what you intend to prove and how you intend to prove it.

Answer 2

My Thesis Statement outline basically says Social media has helped the economy by adding millions of jobs and billions of dollars per year.

Answer 3

I want my paper to convince people that social media is the greatest thing ever because it has created jobs

Answer 4

Thesis statement: Social media has helped the economy by adding millions of jobs and billions of dollars per year.
That's a good one. This sentence should appear at the end of your introduction. It needs to lead into the first main point you make to PROVE your thesis is true.

Now -- where's the outline you developed.

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