Do you like the title of this poem?

Question

I created it myself does it sound ok.
Were supposed to write about school.

Getting Ready For School

Breakfast, get dressed, fix hair,
get dressed, fix hair, makeup,
fix hair, makeup, blush,
makeup, blush, brush teeth,
blush, brush teeth, earrings,
brush teeth, earrings, necklace,
earrings, necklace, bracelet,
necklace, bracelet, rings,
bracelet, rings, perfume,
rings, perfume, deotorant,
perfume, deotorant, jacket,
deotorant, jacket, heavy coat,
jacket, heavy coat, i.d.,
i.d., totebag, car
totebag, car, arrive

Answer 1

It's fine.

Watch one spelling item, though: deodorant (no "t" in that word!)