Question

Is this a good title?

Believe in yourself

If there ever is a time
That you shall fall
Pick yourself up
And stand up
Be proud who you are
Every single day
Believe in yourself
And you succeed that way
Think about your future
Think about your dream
Push yourself forward
And try to believe
If you make a mistake
Try at it again
And you'll have a bright future you'll make it through to the end

Answer 1

Hint: where is says and stand up it should say and stand tall

Answer 2

I think the title is good.