Asked by feecan

In revising his essay, Silvio realizes that there are some paragraphs in which the topic sentence doesn't support the thesis. What can he do to correct this?

A. Add transitions where needed

B. Revise his thesis to include all the points made by the different topic sentences *****MY ANSWER

C. Revise supporting sentences to ensure that the connection to the topic sentence is clear

D. Write a new sentence that supports the thesis and states the main point of the paragraph
Answered by Ms. Sue
I disagree.
Answered by feecan
Can somebody please check this for me?
Answered by feecan
Then my final answer would have to be C.
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes, C.
Answered by bobpursley
It could be a solutions, but it reminds me of a scatter-brained explaination which goes places unknown.
Often, there is a better solution: make certain the supporting arguments support the thesis. C could work, if it is in fact a matter of clarity, but all the essays I have read, D is more likely to work: often folks bring up points (sentences) that have nothing to do with the argument. They are better off making the points focus on the thesis.
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