Asked by Pepsi

**Could you check my response and give me feedback on it?***


Jaycob is relaxed, sitting in the back row of the class. He is tapping his pencil on his open textbook and is avoiding eye contact with the teacher. His friends are quietly making jokes around him. In three to five sentences, explain whether or not Jaycob is actively listening or not. If so, what is he doing right? If not, what can he do to pay better attention in class?

(My answer)
Jaycob isn't actively listening in class. Sitting in the back row of his class will make it hard for him to understand what he is learning. Especially with other students around him that are talking. Avoiding eye contact with his teacher will also cause him to loose focus. Jaycob should first tell his classmates not to talk during class. If they continue to chat Jaycob should ask his teacher about moving his seat somewhere so he can focus.

(Should I have some kind of concluding sentence or do you think this is fine?)

Answers

Answered by Pepsi
(Correction)
Especially with other students around him that are talking. Avoiding eye contact with his teacher will also cause him to loss focus

(I just read back)

Answered by Pepsi
Wait I don't know... I think it was good before!
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes, a concluding sentence would help this paragraph.

He will be able to listen and learn if he sits close to the front of the room.
Answered by Pepsi
Thank you Ms. Sue!
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome, Pepsi.
Answered by Writeacher
Be sure you are clear on these words and when to use each one:
- loss
- lose
- loose

Also, this is a fragment, not a complete sentence:
Especially with other students around him that are talking.
How can you fix it without losing any of the meaning or rhythm of what you've written?
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