Asked by Afrikah

How can I make this sentence better, or is it OK?
If students at Miriam Middle School weren’t excited about their upcoming gravity project, they were after school Friday.
Answered by Writeacher
It reads fine, but it's a bit wordy. Maybe this?

If Miriam Middle School students weren't excited about the gravity project, they certainly were on Friday afternoon.
Answered by Afrikah
Or is there another word you could suggest rather than certainly? I'm going based off their reaction.. Maybe seemingly?
Answered by Writeacher
You could use “sure” or “surely” instead of “certainly.” Any of those 3 will work.
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