Asked by ELIZ
                I was writing this sentences, could you check it, please.
Sue hasn’t eaten any fruit or vegetables for a while.
Ned started to eat healthier food last year.
Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.
Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.
Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.
Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
Thanks
            
            
        Sue hasn’t eaten any fruit or vegetables for a while.
Ned started to eat healthier food last year.
Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.
Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.
Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.
Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
Thanks
Answers
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    Sue hasn’t eaten any fruit or vegetables for a while. 
<b>OK</b>
Ned started to eat healthier food last year.
<b>OK</b>
Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.
<b>Not OK</b>
Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.
<b>Not OK</b>
Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.
<b>Not OK</b>
Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
<b>OK, but sounds a little odd.</b>
    
<b>OK</b>
Ned started to eat healthier food last year.
<b>OK</b>
Sue hasn’t never visited a doctor on a regular basis.
<b>Not OK</b>
Ned has lived a quiet life before they met.
<b>Not OK</b>
Ned has smoked heavily when he was young.
<b>Not OK</b>
Sue and Ned both want their life healthy lives.
<b>OK, but sounds a little odd.</b>
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/confusion.htm#double_negatives
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sequence.htm
    
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sequence.htm
                    Answered by
            ELIZ
            
    Sue has never visited a doctor on a regular basis. 
Ned had lived a quiet life before they met.
Ned hasn’t smoked heavily when he was young.
    
Ned had lived a quiet life before they met.
Ned hasn’t smoked heavily when he was young.
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    The first two are fine now.
The last one, however, is still weird. This would work: Ned didn't smoke heavily when he was young.
    
The last one, however, is still weird. This would work: Ned didn't smoke heavily when he was young.
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