Asked by ELIZABETH
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I wrote about my routines.. I would like to know what do you think. Thanks
My name is Liz. I am a teacher. I always wake up at 7 o’clock in the morning then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After that, I go out for a walk with my dog in the open field. Then I return home and sometimes I like to buy the bread to my breakfast.
Sometimes in the mornings, I teach English with a special group. After that, I often go to my mother’s house to take my lunch and talk with my family. At around 12 I go to the school because I always like to be early at the school. I work with teenagers until 6:30. Next, I go back home and take a rest. At around 8:30 I often watch some TV and chat with my friend and then I do my online homework. Finally, at 11 o’ clock I always read my English book and go to sleep.
On Sundays and other holidays, I do not follow this routine. In the morning I read the newspaper for some time. I play volleyball with my friends. I take my midday meal a little later than I take on the week days. After that, I always go to shopping and in the afternoon, I go out for a long walk with my friends.
I wrote about my routines.. I would like to know what do you think. Thanks
My name is Liz. I am a teacher. I always wake up at 7 o’clock in the morning then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After that, I go out for a walk with my dog in the open field. Then I return home and sometimes I like to buy the bread to my breakfast.
Sometimes in the mornings, I teach English with a special group. After that, I often go to my mother’s house to take my lunch and talk with my family. At around 12 I go to the school because I always like to be early at the school. I work with teenagers until 6:30. Next, I go back home and take a rest. At around 8:30 I often watch some TV and chat with my friend and then I do my online homework. Finally, at 11 o’ clock I always read my English book and go to sleep.
On Sundays and other holidays, I do not follow this routine. In the morning I read the newspaper for some time. I play volleyball with my friends. I take my midday meal a little later than I take on the week days. After that, I always go to shopping and in the afternoon, I go out for a long walk with my friends.
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Answered by
PsyDAG
For being an English teacher, you need to review your use of commas. You omit several commas.
https://www.google.com/search?client=safari&rls=en&q=comma&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8commas.
https://www.google.com/search?client=safari&rls=en&q=comma&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8commas.
Answered by
Writeacher
In addition to PsyDAG's notation about comma use, I think you need to combine many of these sentences to make them read more smoothly (in place of so many short, choppy-sounding sentences). Keep the time format the same throughout (7:00 instead of 7 o'clock), and work on idiomatic use of prepositions, verbs, and other words. Check the following, and let me know if you have questions.
<i>My name is Liz, and I am a teacher. I always wake up at 7:00 in the morning, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go out for a walk with my dog in the open field. When I return home, I like to toast the bread for my breakfast.
Sometimes I teach English in the morning with a special group. After that, I often go to my mother’s house to eat my lunch and talk with my family. Around noon, I return to the school because I always like to be early. I work with teenagers until 6:30.
Afterwards, I go back home and take a rest. Around 8:30, I often watch some TV and chat with my friend before doing my online homework. Finally, at 11:00, I read my English book and go to sleep.
On Sundays and other holidays, I do not follow this routine. In the morning I read the newspaper for some time. I play volleyball with my friends. I eat my midday meal a little later than I do on the weekdays. After that, I always go to shopping, and in the afternoons, I go out for a long walk with my friends.</i>
<i>My name is Liz, and I am a teacher. I always wake up at 7:00 in the morning, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go out for a walk with my dog in the open field. When I return home, I like to toast the bread for my breakfast.
Sometimes I teach English in the morning with a special group. After that, I often go to my mother’s house to eat my lunch and talk with my family. Around noon, I return to the school because I always like to be early. I work with teenagers until 6:30.
Afterwards, I go back home and take a rest. Around 8:30, I often watch some TV and chat with my friend before doing my online homework. Finally, at 11:00, I read my English book and go to sleep.
On Sundays and other holidays, I do not follow this routine. In the morning I read the newspaper for some time. I play volleyball with my friends. I eat my midday meal a little later than I do on the weekdays. After that, I always go to shopping, and in the afternoons, I go out for a long walk with my friends.</i>
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