Asked by Maya

Writing an argument essay on why Michael Jackson is the worlds greatest entertainer of all time. Some counter arguments I thought of are how people can say he was "back in his time" but not anymore, and i can back it up with stating facts. I have written my body of the essay because that part contains my opinion but I was wondering if anyone could help me come up with ideas for the intro? I need a good hook which draws the reader in and i was thinking my background could be defining what the greatest entertainer means? Not sure how to word all this and i really need a good intro and hook, can anyone give me ideas? not links please :)
Answered by Ms. Sue
How about using words from one of his songs as a hook?
Answered by Writeacher
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1494896037

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Answered by Maya
Im having trouble coming up with ideas? I dont want to use his words from a song just yet since I have to state my opinion later on in the essay, for the thesis. I was thinking to say something to do with music ? but again thats not the topic?
Answered by Ms. Sue
You could use these words as a hook.

": Heal the world / Make it a better place / For you and for me / And the entire human race…"

Then you could tie it that hook into your thesis.

Don't you think he made the world a better place?
Answered by Maya
Thats really good but my topic is why hes the greatest entertainer, not what he did outside of music?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Didn't his music make the world a better place?

You know his music. Maybe you can find a more suitable quote.
Answered by Maya
yah you are right, thanks ill try to think of something.
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